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High above on the mountains I see our house

I tread in carefully into the room

And see dreams that have gathered dust,

Some those have never come true.

 

In the corner,

On a desk sits a letter.

That was once started,

Years ago,

But never finished.

Its recipient never knowing,

What truths and feelings lie within.

 

On a dresser,

Lays a necklace.

Once worn out of love.

But now sits alone,

With no one left to claim it.

The love it once inspired.

Almost lost for all time.

 

On a shelf lies a book,

That sits un-completed.

The author having given up,

After losing inspiration.

Dust replacing the thoughts.

Time washing away the words.

 

A door opens to the outside.

And I look  out in eagerness

Waiting for someone to walk in

Someone living now in hopes and dreams.

 

My eyes turn their attention away,

And come upon the pair of eyes

That is looking my way.

And smile in recognition.

And almost walk towards them.

But they are pulled away,

And the moment is lost.

 

I smile in reflection

smile out of love.

And the person who they belong to,

Turns and re-enters the house.

For they know it is time.

 

 

They return to the room.

And sit alone.

Among the hopes, the dreams.

The trinkets, and  the special moments

And they sit and smile inward.

Alone in their thoughts.

Alone in their house,

Remembering the time I was there……..

 

 

 

Posted by soulsearcher at 12:29 AM - 15 Comments   Add a Comment  
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You write like an angel this one is too sad for words....I think you are wonderful...I pray you are well...I love you...Colo  
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by Coloconnect (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 1, 2006 @ 12:34 AM




Colo thanks for the compliment....am doing fine and hope you are too, just been busy with work.....take care and thanks again  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 1, 2006 @ 12:40 AM




You've reminded me of memories of things that could have been and yet are. This piece was like watching a feather falling from a great height gently to land on the ground. As I see it land, I listen to the sound it will make then just stand and watch it sit there reflecting on all that has just happened. Somehow peaceful. Thanks Soul...  
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by Rosie (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 4, 2006 @ 1:49 AM




Rosie we all have these places within us in our hearts and minds, i am glad this could make you go back to yours....  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 4, 2006 @ 6:34 AM




The message in this poem is overwhelming...
I enjoy your work..
 
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by The River Rat (PM , CC ) on Tuesday April 4, 2006 @ 6:55 PM




Beautiful soulsearcher...  
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by ^BELLE^ (PM , CC ) on Friday April 7, 2006 @ 1:20 AM




Thank you River, am glad you liked it.....good to see you .....  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Friday April 7, 2006 @ 11:32 AM




Thanks BELLE, its good to see you too.........  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Friday April 7, 2006 @ 11:33 AM




Beautiful SoulSearcher.....
Peace & Blessings.....
Day-Dreamer
 
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by Day-Dreamer (PM , CC ) on Saturday April 8, 2006 @ 7:57 PM




So beautiful. So true. Our priorities change, their depth...so many times with the turning of each new page.
Not even wanting to 'go' there, knowing that that particular chapter holds the meaning that lies close to the end.
And don't we all want to be thought of with such fondness and love everlasting?
Sometimes there is not enough 'life' to watch all of our dreams come true.

Well my friend, you've once again peeked under 'my' lid and so eloquently phrased the 'remainders'...meaning.
Tidbits tossed, some even hidden. Some exposed but not open to meaning. And I ask, "what was it's purpose?"
Deep down I do know, but, baby steps.

We really do live 'lifetimes' in these special moments. And 'your' eyes are gifted to see and most of all, to cherish!

You are so special soul, and I thank you for sharing a very special corner of your soul, and for the inspiration!

And for the 'remainder of my day', I will put forth the effort to do a little *dusting*, for so much has just sat so very long, and maybe finish...a thought or two!
Peace My Friend...Solid
 
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by Solid Ground (PM , CC ) on Thursday April 13, 2006 @ 3:39 PM




Happy Easter Soulsearcher.  
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by Scratch (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 16, 2006 @ 3:47 PM




As I read your poem, I began to reflect on all the neglected dreams and aspirations of my youth. Your poem was easy for me to identify with - and it was incredibly well-written.

However, I also remember the prayer I say every night with my family. I ask God to help 'guide me and to do His will.' And I remind myself that if I didn't do it in the past, He may either want me to do it later...or not at all.

And I find comfort in that thought.
 
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by Mokie Joe (PM , CC ) on Sunday April 23, 2006 @ 10:39 AM




You too scratch...  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Monday April 24, 2006 @ 12:18 PM




hi Mokie..good to see you around after long....and yes the thought is worth a thought! ....thanks for dropping by....take care...  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Monday April 24, 2006 @ 12:19 PM




Solid, you always know where my thoughts come from..and what they mean...glad to see you ...and hope youre doing fine.....  
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by soulsearcher (PM , CC ) on Monday April 24, 2006 @ 12:22 PM


 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

   
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